Tuesday, September 27, 2011

The Slow Revolt (aka Bomb Pupil), Draft #4, September 17, 2011

Here is the fourth variation on Bomb Pupil, which has now gone through a title change, The Slow Revolt.  Being for the ease of rendering, here is the first few lines and then a .pdf of the document for your perusal.


              to difficult a vacant

              & mere the sight         'kitty'


                             dual feet crank the fright
                             as blaze stabs
                             frame shock
                             'oh my...he...stabbed...help'


                            how cold nigh
                            these bystander
                            reign fogwind


Click HERE for the full text of the fourth variation.